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Yes. I wonder if it is possible for you to introduce some terms to point out the main factors that help you define the level of social/personal ability. Your essay is really good. This is only my opinion

Your essay has a very good structure and you've made your points clearly with vivid examples. The analysis of characters is quite sufficient. I really enjoyed reading it. Your statement in the second paragraph makes me a bit puzzled. Why do you say that "the relationship with Mr. Hu and her den...

You have a nice clear writing style and the text flows pretty well. I really like your interpretation of their state of mind by using the phrase “the grass is greener on the other side”. The second paragraph is very well written. I agree with the above comment that the last paragraph is a bit confus...

Dear Wangshu, thank you for your suggestions. I would try to further elaborate on Mona Lisa Smile and point out the differences in a clearer way. Perhaps it is not appropriate to briefly write a "collectivist society" here. What I mean is that although Tsai-ling seems to be a maverick in t...

I think your essay has good coherence and you’ve made a clear thesis statement. You have given a lot of examples with details, and it is easy for me to follow your ideas. From my point of view, the essay might be better if you make the descriptions more concise, and some character analysis may be mo...

Almost everyone craves for success. Interpretation of success is often closely related with money, power, and pursuit of happiness. Some exact circumstances that are considered successful can vary greatly from culture to culture, from individual to individual. In this essay I shall endeavor to make ...