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by Jinfeng G.
Tue May 01, 2018 11:22 am
Forum: Group A
Topic: 13 - The guide to chase the dream
Replies: 12
Views: 11425

Re: 13 - The guide to chase the dream

Guides offer a direction to the life. Whatever you realize, it exists in our life. Comparing two movies, Kathrine and Wang Cailing, both were woman; both had their dreams; both struggled for the difficulties in reality. But even if there were challenges in life, they still persevered to chase their ...
by Jinfeng G.
Tue Apr 24, 2018 4:05 pm
Forum: Group A
Topic: 13 - The guide to chase the dream
Replies: 12
Views: 11425

Re: 13 - The guide to chase the dream

Hi, Zixuan! I really like your opinions and agree with you. You have a valuable idea. Whatever we stay in uncertain situation, we should not limit our sight to observe higher state. Whatever we stay in a era, even if in the time period of the movie, we still have chances to achieve ourselves. As lik...
by Jinfeng G.
Tue Apr 24, 2018 9:05 am
Forum: Group A
Topic: 13 - The guide to chase the dream
Replies: 12
Views: 11425

Re: 13 - The guide to chase the dream

Hi, Mikaela! Thanks for your opinions on Joan’s decision. I think your opinions are reasonable and convincing. Actually it was a complicated question. But my opinions might be a little different. Her decision had her own reasons. But when she made this decision, I think she should struggle to her or...
by Jinfeng G.
Mon Apr 23, 2018 2:51 pm
Forum: Group A
Topic: 13 - The guide to chase the dream
Replies: 12
Views: 11425

Re: 13 - The guide to chase the dream

Hi, Zixuan! Thanks for your suggestions to my essay. Maybe your opinions are reasonable, and I ignored some details. I think I will elaborate my personal opinions in my essay and cut down some unimportant details. I believe I can enrich my essay to more convincing and attractive. As for my position ...
by Jinfeng G.
Sun Apr 22, 2018 12:42 pm
Forum: Group A
Topic: 13 - The guide to chase the dream
Replies: 12
Views: 11425

Re: 13 - The guide to chase the dream

Hi, Mikaela! Thanks for your help. I am grateful that your response reminded me of some details in the movies. :) I think they will be helpful in my essay. And I am so sorry that I didn’t give more explanations on decisions. I think I will complete them more as possible in my final paper. Then what ...
by Jinfeng G.
Wed Apr 18, 2018 4:22 pm
Forum: Group A
Topic: 2 - Analysis Between “Mona Lisa Smile” and “And the Spring Comes”
Replies: 9
Views: 8397

Re: 2 - Analysis Between “Mona Lisa Smile” and “And the Spring Comes”

Hi, Zixuan! I am surprised that you raised a valuable point in your essay. Your ideas are very attractive and newly. :) But there are still problems in the essay. I think the structure is not very clear and it may cause some confusion for readers. I think maybe one or two core sentences to support y...
by Jinfeng G.
Wed Apr 18, 2018 4:11 pm
Forum: Group A
Topic: 1 - Comparisons on “And the Spring Comes” and “Mona Lisa Smile”
Replies: 11
Views: 10814

Re: 1 - Comparisons on “And the Spring Comes” and “Mona Lisa Smile”

Hi, Mikaela A.! I am very surprised that the structure in your essay is clear and divided into several parts. :) I really like this style to organize your ideas. :D In you essay, you showed the theme about women in “And the Spring Comes” directly and told how the movie expressed the theme. But I thi...
by Jinfeng G.
Mon Apr 16, 2018 1:09 pm
Forum: Group A
Topic: 13 - The guide to chase the dream
Replies: 12
Views: 11425

Re: 13 - The guide to chase the dream

Hi, Mikaela A.! First, thanks for your suggestions to my essay, I think they are useful. :D Then I give my answers to your questions about the decisions made by characters in the movies. In my opinion,I agreed with most of their decisions, even though a small decision. For example, in the beginning,...
by Jinfeng G.
Wed Apr 11, 2018 3:17 am
Forum: Group A
Topic: 13 - The guide to chase the dream
Replies: 12
Views: 11425

13 - The guide to chase the dream

Mona Lisa Smile is film about a young teacher who struggled for some much conservative manners. And the Spring Comes is talking about an artistic woman Wang Cailing struggled between dream and reality in agony. Kathrine and Wang Cailing, both are women; both have their dream; both struggled for the ...