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by 1226847047
Tue May 12, 2020 12:11 am
Forum: Group I
Topic: The sorrow of women in the old age
Replies: 12
Views: 10287

Re: The sorrow of women in the old age

Reflection: 1) What were your expectations for the border -crossing activity? Are your expectations met? Why or why not? I hoped that I could learn different perspectives of looking at things and improve my ability of cooperation and communication in this activity. I think all my expectations have b...
by 1226847047
Mon May 11, 2020 12:08 pm
Forum: Group I
Topic: The sorrow of women in the old age
Replies: 12
Views: 10287

Re: The sorrow of women in the old age

Revision The sorrow of women in the old age Mona Lisa Smile tells the story of the United States in 1953, when the times are changing. Catherine, who graduated from the Open University of Berkeley, went to Wesley women's traditional college to teach history of traditional art. However, Catherine, wh...
by 1226847047
Tue Apr 21, 2020 2:48 am
Forum: Group I
Topic: The sorrow of women in the old age
Replies: 12
Views: 10287

Re: The sorrow of women in the old age

Hi Yuhang, Thank you so much for responding to my paper! When I know that you are a Chinese student, I am also very happy! As for your opinion of clearing the theme and filling in the details, I think it is very valid so I went back to reread my essay. In my back analysis of my essay, I feel like I ...
by 1226847047
Tue Apr 21, 2020 2:48 am
Forum: Group I
Topic: The sorrow of women in the old age
Replies: 12
Views: 10287

Re: The sorrow of women in the old age

Hi Cheng Penyu,
Thank you for the compliment! Which part do you think we should cut and adjust? Could you give us more specific advice?
Wu Qianlin, Ji Linjin
by 1226847047
Tue Apr 21, 2020 1:38 am
Forum: Group I
Topic: The sorrow of women in the old age
Replies: 12
Views: 10287

Re: The sorrow of women in the old age

Hi, Alex Thank you so much for responding to my paper! Your suggestion is very reasonable! In the process of finishing the whole article, we were intended to focus on the third part of the comparison. However, we spent much effort on expound, thus ignoring providing details. In paragragh7, perhaps w...
by 1226847047
Tue Apr 21, 2020 12:39 am
Forum: Group I
Topic: The sorrow of women in the old age
Replies: 12
Views: 10287

Re: The sorrow of women in the old age

Hi, Cheng Fengjie We are glad to hear from you.Thank you very much for your suggestions on our article! Your suggestion is very reasonable! Your suggestion that we should add more details to support our article, indeed, our whole article looks a bit empty due to lack of details. Maybe we put more at...
by 1226847047
Mon Apr 20, 2020 9:11 am
Forum: Group I
Topic: Hold "Ideal and Love" and Strive for a Male-dominated Society
Replies: 8
Views: 6706

Re: Hold "Ideal and Love" and Strive for a Male-dominated Society

Hi Cheng Fengjie Thank you for your reply. If you want to correct the title, maybe you can exchange "strive for" for "fight against". If you must use the word"Male-dominated", I hope you can increase some details about how men influenced women in both movies. If you hav...
by 1226847047
Sat Apr 18, 2020 4:27 am
Forum: Group I
Topic: Hold "Ideal and Love" and Strive for a Male-dominated Society
Replies: 8
Views: 6706

Re: Hold "Ideal and Love" and Strive for a Male-dominated Society

Dear Cheng Fengjie Hello, I am glad to read your article and know what you think of these two films. I have some personal opinions below, and I'm very glad that you can continue to read it. After reading your movie review, I think this review is complete and contains sufficient evidence to support t...
by 1226847047
Sat Apr 18, 2020 3:21 am
Forum: Group I
Topic: The Movie/Cultural Essay
Replies: 8
Views: 6545

Re: The Movie/Cultural Essay

Dear Yuhang Liu Hello, I am glad to read your article and know what you think of these two films. I have some personal opinions below, and I'm very glad that you can continue to read it. This article points directly to the theme--women’s empowerment and personal value, and accurately analyses the sh...
by 1226847047
Sat Apr 18, 2020 2:25 am
Forum: Group I
Topic: Cultural Essay
Replies: 6
Views: 4770

Re: Cultural Essay

Dear Alexander Alomar Hello, I am glad to read your article and know what you think of these two films. I have some personal opinions below, and I'm very glad that you can continue to read it. In terms of some details of the two movies, you retell them very well, but this part of the content in the ...