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I can't explain my ideas well sometimes. Thank my parters for fixing my mistakes. I fix my essay acoording to the suggestions given. I didn't make the fomer paragraph fixed for they are a big project. I didn't explcit my ideas before in the beginig, instead, I put it behind so my essay is not strong...

After fixing: Movie Review & Critique – Mona Lisa Smile & And the Spring comes 180823 叶水秀 Well into Mona Lisa Smile, a story whispered that Katherine Watson, a first-year teacher from Oakland State, who had wanted to teach at Wellesley College all her life. So when a position opened in the A...

Dear Taylor & Chris, I am glad to hear from you,and I thonk your suggeations helpful. To address your advice,here is my reply. Firstly, I would like toexplain the statement on the 1paragraph but actually it was picked out from the dialogue of the film. I do think it shows Katherine's strong will...

Dear Chris, I really like you article. Your thoughtful idea was conveyed in your words and those long sentences, which make me tired. After reading it, I have some suggestions for you. First, it’s better for you to contrast more clearly. You did very well in criticize the two films respectively, you...

I have read your article for few days, here is my suggestions: 1. Structure: In the beginning of the article, you make a brief introduction of two movies, and it’s nice to depict the theme clearly at the end of the first paragraph. I found that your article is surrounded by the point “the two are re...

Movie Review & Critique – Mona Lisa Smile & And the Spring comes 180823 叶水秀 Shuixiu Ye Well into Mona Lisa Smile , a story whispered that Katherine Watson, a first-year teacher from Oakland State, who had wanted to teach at Wellesley College all her life. So when a position opened in the Art...