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Reflection: Thank you for all of your kind remarks about my writing! I really appreciate your feedback. I looked over my essay and corrected the grammar and spelling mistakes you drew my attention to. It is amazing what silly mistakes you fine when rereading your first written draft. This is why bo...

LIFE COMPLEXITY & THE PATH TO SUCCESS THROUGH CHINESE AND AMERICAN CULTURAL LENSES (REVISED) TIERRA PRICE “And the Spring Comes” is a Chinese film set in a small town. A young and extraordinarily talented vocal teacher, Wang Cailing, embarks on a journey to become an opera singer at the Nationa...

Hello Yijing and Xinel,

I apologize for not getting back to you. I have been struggling with my school and work load, as well as some family news. I will reply by the end of the day with my comments and revised essay. Thank you for your patience and kindness.

Best,
Tierra

Yijing, It's very interesting to learn the different styles of English writing taught in your country. You can definitely say those kinds of things if you feel it is beneficial. In my opinion, there is no wrong or correct way to write. Instead, its beneficial to one's writing skills and abilities to...

Xinlei.C, It's okay if you do not feel like it is enough. I think it is great that you are able to at least identify the issues and work towards correcting them and developing your skills in English writing. I can only imagine how difficult it can be writing in a second language, and I truly admire ...

Hey Xinlei, First Paragraph: After watching And the Spring Comes and Mona Lisa Smiles, some questions resounds (resound) around me. What is art? What makes it good or bad? And who decide? What are the standards? What a woman is going to be? (Revise this sentence to make more sense to the reader. Not...

Hello Yijing, I thought you drew very good conclusion about the movies and made some great points. To strengthen your essay I recommend the following: 1. In the opening paragraph , you give a particular analysis about the main points of each movie, but after reading the paper fully, it seems as if t...

LIFE COMPLEXITY & THE PATH TO SUCCESS THROUGH CHINESE AND AMERICAN CULTURAL LENSES TIERRA PRICE “And the Spring Comes” is a Chinese film set in a small town. A young and extraordinarily talented vocal teacher, Wang Cailing, embarks on a journey to become an opera singer at the National Opera hou...